I think the melody is good, the drums are a bit lower than necessary and the lead at 2:03 is a bit loud, it doesn't let the rest of the track shine, but nothing more to say. I believe less is more, and the length isn't a problem for me!

I can see the gating you've used there is very good! The melody is fairly decent too and the 'bugs' are as I say, on point. I only didn't like the abrupt end, it didn't quite match the rest of the track. Otherwise, good job!